In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Nowadays a number of people who is overweight considerably increases especially in developed countries. In addition, the majority do not have a healthy body.
The first reason of obesity is that people eat a lot of unhealthy food especially fast food. They are always busy to solve many problems in life, so they usually select fast food because it is cheap and fast to use. In addition, children really like fast food like chicken and potato fried, thus fast food becomes to popular with everyone, but it also brings many detrimental effects. Moreover, people also eat inorganic fruits and vegetables which contains many chemical fertilizers, which causes not only obesity but also illnesses relating to heart, blood pressure. Another reason can be that people do not have enough time or become to lazy to do exercises. Due to the development of technology, adults have not to do many houseworks and children are crazy about playing games and chatting with their friends instead of playing sports, which leads to gain extra weight.
The most effective solution to reduce weight is doing regular exercises. Doctors believe that everyone only need an hour per day to do exercises, which will improve health considerably and have a good body. Besides that, doing exercises help to reduce stresses and advance mental health. Moreover, they should eat more organic fruits and vegetables than meat and the kinds of food contain the fat, drink much water and build a reasonable diet.
In conclusion, I believe that if people eat nutrition foods and do exercises regularly, thay can improve both physical and mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13157894737 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56405309061 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0313500265 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128111360741 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050902031732 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304583729404 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812310586255 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0056312023416 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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