In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In modern times, people are able to enjoy the convenient changes in lives with several crucial aspects of development. However, these kinds of convenience may result in obesity, overweight, and other serious health problems. In this essay, I will discuss different reasons and then give several possible suggestions.
One of the reasons of this problem is the rapid development of technology. With the popularity of tablets in use and the emergence of food delivery services, it is much easier for people to order gourmet food with a simple finger-tap without stepping out the door. Moreover, since streaming services like Netflix and Disney+ have become dominant choices when it comes to entertainment, more people tend to stay at home instead of going out during holidays. Another reason for this problem is the changes of eating habits. The preference of eating has been changing into delicate food such as fast food, desserts and soda drinks. These kinds of food contain not only high sugar but also fat, which may contribute to obesity, over-extraction in calories.
Civilized disease could pose a serious threat to humankind’s health, which we cannot overlook. The most efficient way to prevent from this problem is to exercise more. However, some people may consider that exercise itself is unappealing. Thanks to technology, there are various kinds of apps combined with AR technologies that encourage people to exercise outside more, instead of staying at home.
To sum up, since people are enjoying the convenience of what technology brings, technology itself could be a solution instead of being hazardous trouble. It solely depends on how humankind utilizes it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3670411985 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81348454209 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647940074906 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3781306907 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117733076945 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373885278466 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358350203459 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757335698342 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032896554552 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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