Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Learning how to live in groups is truly crucial in our lives, nevertheless, where to learn it has debated for a long time. Some say family can provide appropriate conditions to learn, while others say schools are better places for offspring to acquire these kinds of knowledge. In my opinion, schools are the best places for them to become a good team player.
Family is the first group that people will get in touch with. From learning to crawl to learning to speak, babies will obtain all basic abilities to know how to live. Interaction between parents and siblings will able children to build up their manners and personalities step by step. However, since family is one of the most intimidate relationships in our whole lives, we will try our best to tolerate and accept all the merits and flaws of our family members, which may let kids become pampered and spoiled. Being a good member of society still needs several important traits that families cannot offer. Thus, schools will be ideal places to teach them.
There are several reasons that faculties will be better places. First of all, schools gather students from different backgrounds, sex, and nationality. This enables children to communicate with each other and exchange their different points of view. Moreover, teachers play a vital role to build their integrity of knowing right or wrong, which is also crucial to live in a group. Finally, interacting with different people also teaches students to respect others. To let them realize the importance to embrace every person who is different from them.
Socialization is a long journey; however, I believe that once kids can interact well in schools, they will be well accepted by society. The crucial traits of being good fellows of society must be learned in schools.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, while, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53525146682 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.702652031 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7647058824 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241179069535 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745785641982 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047713284776 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138563959209 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301651744162 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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