Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
People have differing view with regard to the question of who should discipline children in order for them to be good members, parents or teachers? while the role teachers play in upbringing is very important, I would argue that family is even more important in teaching children how to behave well.
There are various reasons why people believe that schools should discipline children to be nice people in the future. Firstly, they may assert teachers must maintain discipline in their classrooms. Secondly, teachers are qualified in different discipline techniques. For example they are trained in advanced levels how to treat teenagers, psychologically. Finally, if teachers do not educate a naughty child at school, other children will suffer from the disruption. Moreover, it could have a negative impact on other pupils and it spreads misbehaving such as smoking, getting drug addicts, being aggressive.
In spite of these arguments, I believe that children should be taught behave well by their parents, because parents spending much time with their children, they know them better and deeper than teachers. Also, parents might be able to understand reasons behind bad behavior. In addition, parents need to be responsible for their child's conducts at home and they must know the consequences of their actions. In other words, in my opinion, parents are ultimate responsible for upbringing of their children.
In conclusion, while schools can help to educate children to have nice personality and become good figures in society, I think that parents have even more important role in this sense.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36614173228 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75141647894 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8863339967 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5384615385 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240587146979 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859360782827 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652408197816 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147293378678 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167132204896 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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