Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
For most people, the training of children takes place in a classroom, nevertheless, I believe it is the duty of parents to raise young children into becoming responsible members of the community.
Children are sent to school to learn from their teachers. The reason for this is because institutions of learning were basically made for this purpose. It is in colleges young adults are taught subjects or courses which forms the bedrock of their careers as they grow, into becoming professional, in their various fields. As a case in point, nurses and doctors got their training from school by respective tutors. This mastery, make them better placed in society. However, I think that, in spite, the education acquired in school, it still does not guarantee acceptable behaviour in the neighbourhood.
The task of raising better fellows in the community rests on parents. This is because parents are the first to come in contact with them and their character formation begins at home, before, during, and after pre-school. As a case in point, children learn from parents through observation and imitation of the way of speech and disposition. An angry and quick-tempered parent would naturally raise young adults like themselves. This trickles down to society at large. I believe this school of thought is most preferred because when children who have gone through academics but are deficient home training, not only bring displeasure to their lineage but are as well nuisance, to themselves and the public.
In conclusion, although teaching children in school is key to making them rewarding members of the community, learning from home the essentials of being better people is fundamental because personality is everything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, nevertheless, so, still, well, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28880866426 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84524634465 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5269975586 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230422619195 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776982673499 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509392803008 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147098903379 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153739146764 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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