The provided picture illustrates the entire development of a honey bee’s life.
The provided picture illustrates the entire development of a honey bee’s life.
A quick glance at the supplied diagram reveals that a complete life circle has five main stages, starting when the female adults lay one egg. It is also considerable that the whole life of a honey bee lasts from 34 to 36 days.
At the beginning, the females lay 1 or 2 eggs every 3 days. After 9 to 10 days, eggs hatch and come in peeling step. During this third phrase, the immature insects will grow up by shedding their skin 3 times. This process initially takes 5 days from the hatching stage, then 7 days later and again 9 days later.
At the following stage, young adults emerge after 30 or 31 days since the circle begins and take only 4 days becoming fully maturities. The life circle of honey bee then comes back to the first stage and repeats all over the time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50632911392 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30310185631 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689873417722 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5940591209 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275842380609 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153674047847 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.306946894737 0.0843802449381 364% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30717512221 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.403037213422 0.0819641961636 492% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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