Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

Essay topics:

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

Nowadays, the number of people learning other languages in addition to their native one is climbing significantly in order to its remarkable benefits. While it is widely believed that going or working abroad are the only purposes of learning new languages, the opponents of this idea, however, claim that there are still other causes. From my perspectives, I suppose that both these views have their own rationality to some extents.

On the one hand, traveling and working overseas is one of the most crucial reasons for individuals who want to learning foreign languages. This is because learning the destination countries’ languages would increases tourists’ ability to communicate with the locals. By this way, travellers could ask for help whenever they want if they get lost or need some helpful advices. Also, learning a new language could broaden job seekers’ opportunities. It is undeniable that the more countries you can apply, the higher rate you can be hired.

On the other hand, it is effortless to figure out other aims for language learners to try to know more than just their mother tongues. Firstly, it could give you chances to explore the enormous international sources of knowledge. For instance, there is a vastness of professional data referring to some specific major written by English that scholars and some scientists need to go through to complete their researches. Hence, they have to learn English in order to serve their studying path. Furthermore, learning foreign languages is also a brilliant way to discover the unique culture of other nations. Specifically, a language is the result of developing process of a country from ancient times until now. Thereby, it is able to reflect several habits as well as the locals’ customs so learners would figure out some amazing facts about the inhabitants living in this place.

In conclusion, whereas I admit that the major purposes for almost learners are joining an overseas tour or supporting successful career, I would argue that there are still numerous reasons for language learners.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...ination countries' languages would increases tourists' ability to communicate w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26268656716 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90471843275 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585074626866 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1550042522 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0625 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282360084797 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817964010438 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653643640895 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155360455953 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039369695994 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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