The sales made by a coffee shop in an office building an a typical weekday
The table given bellow illustrate the trade obtained by a coffee shop in an agency office on a average weekday. It can be seen that throughout the day coffee was the top sold beverage than tea and for meals menu pastries was a bigger total sales, followed by sandwiches. All of that saw fluctuate sales from morning till night.
Regarding to the data, in the morning (7.30-10.30) coffee and pastries was the highest sales at 265 and 275. The sales of tea saw just half of the coffee's total sales. Whereas sandwiches only less than a quartet of pastries completely sales. Start in the afternoon (10.30-2.30), coffee, tea and pastries sales decreased significantly. But there was a sharp rose of 150 in sandwiches sales, from 50 to 200.
In other hand, from in the afternoon to evening (2.30-5.30) coffee, tea, and sandwiches sales had gradually declined again. While pastries sales grew considerably from 95 to 150. In the last time, at night (5.30-8.30)coffee and tea reached a peak at 200 for coffee and 75 for tea. For meals, Sandwiches sales grew rapidly twice more than before but pastries sales declined from 150 to 80.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...w just half of the coffees total sales. Whereas sandwiches only less than a quartet of ...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hes sales had gradually declined again. While pastries sales grew considerably from 9...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78865979381 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62876995984 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9623606472 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4166666667 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168492283474 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707719889508 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840681968642 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129068601326 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684584347845 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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