The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include:
– A brief introduction of yourself
– Your experience and relevant skills
– Why you want the job
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Dear Sir or Madam,
Reference to library job advertisement which I have seen on your school career, I would like to introduce my expertise and knowledge along with experience related to particular job. Please allow me.
My name is muhammad musa. my qualification is MBA management and completed my degree in Jan-2003. After that I started worke in IMCB college, Islamabad as senior librarian since sep-2004 to dec-2007.My key responsibilities were data storages in system, update inventory & auditing. along with that I was responsible to ensure the availability of new books in the library. I have expertise in MS office, Auto cad, Viso 2010, managing supported software.
I am very hard working and passionate to complete my duties. I am qualified person, I always wish to continue my struggle to move forward and look into scope of work.
I hope you will give me this opportunity .
Kind regards,
Muhammad Musa
</span><br>
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: My
...e allow me. My name is muhammad musa. my qualification is MBA management and com...
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...or librarian since sep-2004 to dec-2007.My key responsibilities were data storages...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g and passionate to complete my duties. I am qualified person, I always wish to c...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rd and look into scope of work. I hope you will give me this opportunity ...
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Suggestion: .
...I hope you will give me this opportunity . Kind regards, Muhammad Musa ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56862745098 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52053585932 2.65546596893 133% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.771241830065 0.547539520022 141% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.9956171848 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4545454545 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0913812516048 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0215551011166 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584126466409 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559985859642 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724895790954 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.