In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation

Essay topics:

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.

Why might this be the case?

Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Recently, the phenomenon of owning or renting a house and its corresponding impacts have sparked a massive dispute. In this regard, loads of people in specific countries are interested in buying a house rather than renting one. In my view, various causes such as financial and psychological reasons lead to prefer owning a house.
Obviously, a remarkable number of countries, particularly developing ones, suffer an inflationary economy. Prices of products, like cars and houses, climb remarkably every year. Consequently, in such ill economies, people prefer to purchase houses even a small one. In addition, they have the opportunity to get ride of ever-increasing rents due to owning a home. Meanwhile, house in such countries as Iran and Turkey was considered as a capital and precious commodity.
Moreover, psychological matters contribute to buy houses instead of renting them. Unlike individuals who own their homes, loads of people must move due to their contracts’ expiration. As they live in an area, they might make numerous friends or establish good relationships with their neighbors. Abandonment of an intimate atmosphere which people construct through living in a rented house, eventually ends up several, at least minor, psychological issues, for instance, depression because of the lack of self-esteem in their new rented house in different districts.
On the other hand, we shouldn’t lose sight of miscellaneous benefits of renting houses. Numerous people don’t need to consider about distinctive problems that landlords might struggle with them. Paying tax of houses or dealing with different humans whom refer them to rent their houses are a few examples of house owners’ headaches.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on buying or renting a house, I am inclined to believe that the ability to acquire a house and being a landlord are a positive situation, not just in financial aspects, but also in terms of psychology. To me, I can’t even think about the fact that at the end of each year, you have to pack your all life up and settle in a new strange house. “Home sweet home” is the best adage.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, while, at least, for instance, in addition, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 965.302439024 186% => OK
No of words: 345.0 196.424390244 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2115942029 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99733971525 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 106.607317073 200% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617391304348 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 283.868780488 195% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.8684096253 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196155743981 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588968294158 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608304458611 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107070997061 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507549574608 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 40.7170731707 238% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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