Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Although many people accepting unsatisfied profession to earn a numerous money, others think it is a better to wait until getting right employment regardless their pressing needs. I strongly disagree with public who starting any job without commensurate with their qualification.
On the one hand, it is believed that rising unemployment and fierce competition of jobs might lead to start monotonous profession without taking consideration their academic background and I disagree. In other words, most people nowadays have not living expenses but also press needs such as schools fees to their children and renting their homes. For example, a study has shown that 80% of population in an underdeveloped countries care about reasonable wages and do not look at the nature of work. As a result, the more competition of jobs increase, the less of people care about respectful career path.
On the other hand, other people argue about repercussion of acceptance work which does not meet with qualifications because they spend a precious time to finish their academic studies and field training and I agree. Moreover, experts agree with a theory which suggests that from long-sighted viewpoint, if an employee wants to jump at his or her career ladder, he or she should choice a creative job which may reach them after many years to managerial level. Furthermore, the more right positions which select, the more leadership and supervisory skills you get. For instance, studies have been conducted in developed countries show that most people prefer to wait until getting right job can lead them to management level. As consequence, even though some individuals prefer to earn money to meet with their requirements, a massive rate of people still go through with selecting suitable job.
To sum up, on spite of needs of many people pushing them to start unknown career, most people in many countries prefer starting jobs meet with their competencies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'country'?
Suggestion: country
... 80% of population in an underdeveloped countries care about reasonable wages and do not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 965.302439024 170% => OK
No of words: 314.0 196.424390244 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21337579618 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83175465665 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 106.607317073 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601910828025 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 283.868780488 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8727931081 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.416666667 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 5.23603664747 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137149779005 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525750683653 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03140832518 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861339284939 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018594818582 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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