The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

The given diagram gives information about a production of the electricity for a particular country throughout a power station operated by hydroelectric.
In general, the production started during daytime and closed through night time as well as a process begins from a high-level tanker in the day. However, reverse direction commences a low-level barrage.
First of all, when the sun rises, the water is collected from the river in Dam after that the water flows to generator. Unless the water exists, no electricity in the state. Moreover, the engine finalized the production, the electronics sends to power lines to national grid to lighten the streets and provide electricity to every house and factory.
However, in the night, the opposite process commences from low-level reservoir. In addition, the generator pumps water to high-level collector then closed the production until the next day. There is no electric without install engine and infrastructure near the river.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gine and infrastructure near the river.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, then, well, in addition, in general, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42483660131 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93476425202 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1042036239 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138105472155 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541655999017 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652295404524 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895486443031 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768643371819 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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