Some people thinks that accepting bad situations is the best way, while others have opinion that trying and improving bad situations are better. I partly agree with both opinions, since each view has its own great sides.
When facing bad situations such as getting an uncomfortable job and lacking of money, we have to accept it. This means that we should think positively about those situations. Consider an example, we are not accepted in a company that is in our dream list, like the big 4 consulting companies. Instead, we only get accepted in an "unpopular consulting firm". It then makes us feel dissatisfied with our job. But, actually the wage is greater than the wage in those popular companies. So, we should think about this positive side and forget about the negatives side. This will make us feel happier and grateful than before. And also, we have to consider other positive things that may not appeared in our thoughts before, like the working situation. If we were accepted in those favourite job places, we would not be able to enjoy our life. This means that in every condition that we think as a bad situation, there are still positive things for us. And we have to remember that God works in every situation in our life, so there will not be any situation that actually bad for us.
But, accepting and thinking positively are not enough for us. Because, by only accepting and not introspecting ourselves, we would not try to increase our abilities. For the example, we finally can accept the condition where we are unable to work in those big 4 consulting firms. We then keep relaxed and don't struggle for anything because we think we can't. That will make us not trying to improve anything from ourselves, including learning new skills that are searched by those companies' recruiters. And finally, our career won't shift to a better career, because we only get stuck in the same job.
So, in conclusion, although people may have different opinions, I concur that I only partly agree to both opinions. Because, each of those perspectives has the good thing that can be learnt to establish a better us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sulting firms. We then keep relaxed and dont struggle for anything because we think ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ruggle for anything because we think we cant. That will make us not trying to improv...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t I only partly agree to both opinions. Because, each of those perspectives has the goo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, may, so, still, then, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 3.15609756098 475% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 5.60731707317 1106% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 965.302439024 183% => OK
No of words: 368.0 196.424390244 187% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60912445525 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 106.607317073 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494565217391 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 283.868780488 195% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 1.53170731707 1110% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 8.94146341463 246% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9753866998 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 3.70975609756 458% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16807219897 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555200366074 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657412677239 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129470002991 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095419874447 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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