There is a debate whether it is parents' responsibility or school's responsibility to educate children in being good society members. I completely agree with both views and because of several reasons.
On the one side, it is parents' main responsibility in making sure their children have good manner and proper behavior wherever they are, including in the society. This is because all habits are basically built from the family first. If children are used to behave nicely in the family, they will more likely to act properly in other communities. For example, Anthony has always been taught to say thank you after receiving his favorite toys from his parents. As a result, when he goes to public places and receives favor from other people, he always says thank you.
On the other side, school also bears the responsibility in nurturing its students to be well-behaved people. This is because parents have trusted school to teach their children, where their children will spend most of their time there. Therefore, school should make sure that their children are well-educated and can behave properly wherever they are, including in the society. For instance, Anthony is being taught about respecting older people through Civilization lecture which is taught in the school. Consequently, when Anthony meets older people in his neighborhood, he can behave politely and respect them.
In conclusion, I completely agree that it is both parents and school's responsibilities in teaching children to be good society members because children are basically learn habits from family first, and also parents have trusted school to educate their children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... members because children are basically learn habits from family first, and also pare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2927756654 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78091591529 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4843296113 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.076923077 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250536745161 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892736202259 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732797189005 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18371263191 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737730454703 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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