Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
After graduating in high school ,youngsters face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their educations .they will gain considerable benefits if they get a job straight ,I would argue that it is better to enrol in universities or colleges .
The first attractive reason to option to choose work straight instead of going to school ,they have a strong desire for earning money as soon as possible .as a result ,they can support for economy of their parents , reduce the financial burden of the family in low class-communities and become more independently .besides younger will able to do many things which they have never done before such as:afford their own house,buy car or start a family .furthermore They will have the chance to broaden highly real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.
On the other hand , , I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies.firstly ,academic qualifications are required in many professions .for example it is impossible to become an accountant,a teacher…without having relevant degree . University graduations have access to more and better job opportunities,if you land a degree , they will tend to earn higher salaries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23300970874 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20750554912 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674757281553 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.690506081 43.030603864 422% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.6 112.824112599 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.2 22.9334400587 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.6 5.23603664747 393% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13176352571 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866907096277 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602941380785 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107604024834 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673061330472 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.2329268293 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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