:giving opinion studying road
Topic :giving opinion studying road
“Study ,study more and study forever”.By studying abroad,this could bring enormous benefits for students ,not only do students gain knowledge significantly but also they discover mainstream of a new land .
The biggest reason you should consider a study abroad is the opportunity to see the world .By studying abroad ,you will experience a brand new country with incredible new outlooks customs and activities .
Second ,you might consider studying abroad is for the chance to experience different styles of education .you will have to the side of major that you may not have been exposed at home .One of the major draws is the opportunity to study foreign language ,career opportunity .
Finally,a benefit to studying abroad is the chance to discover yourshelf while gaining an understanding of different culture.New places tests your ability to adapt to diverse situations while being able to slove problem.
In conclusion, although there are some challenges that students may meet along the way, it is worthwhile to experience studying abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, second, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5325443787 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93941782038 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7959014672 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.0 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29308847262 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145819551436 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139573491905 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216506549149 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.271809683834 0.056905535591 478% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.