Some people think they should keep all the money they earn without paying taxes, others disagree. Discuss, what is your opinion?
There has been much debate about whether paying charge for all things is suggested or not. This essay discuss both of these views.
It seems to me that giving tariff for everything will be useful if the government supervise all organs which they have not had fiscal deficit. In this way, not only governmental budget is afford, but also the value of products is determined by tax is imposed to it. So, compensation of duty would be useful for either economical policy or promotion of commercial situation.
While many would argue that toll laws are unfair. Because all groups of society do not earn similar wage. However, for instance an employee and a physician must pay equal money for a specific merchandise. In addition, some companies will weasel out of their debit if they bribe to authority who are responsible.
In conclusion, paying tax will be beneficial if the governmental entity have precise control of process of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'discusses'.
Suggestion: discusses
... things is suggested or not. This essay discuss both of these views. It seems to me ...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'afforded'.
Suggestion: afforded
...is way, not only governmental budget is afford, but also the value of products is dete...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...tion of duty would be useful for either economical policy or promotion of commercial situa...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r promotion of commercial situation. While many would argue that toll laws are unf...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... would argue that toll laws are unfair. Because all groups of society do not earn simil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94936708861 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67367423012 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.727848101266 0.547539520022 133% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9555941894 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13802106449 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478304541219 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364350501611 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759297869634 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403894508068 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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