The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance. Why do people do operations to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, the rate of plastic surgery is rising in regards to the significance of appearance for some people. This essay discusses the reason why persons endorse these changes.
While we must admit everybody likes to be in the center of attention by others, it can be managed. Although having beautiful pretense is inevitable, but if people do not control their instinct, it would have a terrible effect on each country. So, in my point of view, if each family nurture children properly, we will have a better society where their members keep a balance between either their appearance or their spirit.
Based on recent surveys, there are a lot of groups who tend to seem better particularly in developing countries. It seems to me that it a negative change in today's world. Some of the noticeable reasons include: Firstly, this kind of operation is paid attention by celebrities unless they are able to become popular in society as an inaccurate treat which can have improper results. Secondly, in this way, not only accurate treat is disappeared gradually, but also institutions take care of more and more about physical things. There is a proverb says that "the wisdom of people in their eyes". Finally, ethics would be less important than look.
In conclusion, if the government allocates enough budget for other entertainments such as sport and cosmetic altering is limited to people who are burnt in a fire, we would enjoy a better country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02880658436 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75389519821 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658436213992 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4173290896 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173296110251 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508208483997 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359735367066 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804425807103 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317023351841 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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