Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help other. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Following are the reasons why I feel that this is the case.
first, people who are rich should be involved in organization charities in order to help people who are poor because rich people can help the poor gain life's necessities. Charities around the world always search for people who need some help. For instance, there are several charities that attempt to support other people who don't have money, such as UNICEF and END Fund.
Secondly, rich people should help others to get an education. Some countries need education in order to decrease unemployment numbers, since providing that education can be a successful way to improve the countries. This can help unemployed people find jobs and improve their countries by being educated.
additionally, Doing business in poor areas is a good idea as there will be a diminution in the rate of poor people because they can enhance other's lives and improve their countries by contributing to the big business. Thus, this idea can decrease the number of poor in an area and all of them can have jobs instead.
In conclusion, organizing charities, offering education and initiating business with those who are poor are great opportunities for those who are rich to help the poor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01941747573 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6595208559 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529126213592 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4855319483 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139730140352 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636563918607 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414148463997 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072753716999 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450489045862 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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