Species of bird observed in Woodchuck county by season.

Essay topics:

Species of bird observed in Woodchuck county by season.

If we want to catogorize bird migration to woodchuck county, we can observe some of thems migrate here on hot seasons and others on cool seasons, and also some of them always can be seen here.

If we want to tell the species which come here just on summer, they are bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles, and vireos. The bird which come here just on winter is juncos. Finally, birds which come here both in winter and summer are: cardinals, crows, and woodpeckers.

So, if you want to observe a specific kind of bird, you should make plan for the season you want to come here, otherwise, you would not manage to see the species you desire.

For these mentioned details, many birds observers and scientists come here all over the year and it has made different types of financial jobs for here residents; for example, they rent their houses to observers, also they sell their traditional foods, shirts, handmades and so on.

But I believe our government should restrict the number of visitors to make the least side effects on this regions environment. On recent years, by increasing the number of tourists here, sound pollution has increased so much and it had lead to bird depletion here, so our government should make a urgent action to save birds life.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regions'' or 'region's'?
Suggestion: regions'; region's
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ion here, so our government should make a urgent action to save birds life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84403669725 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48475276368 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600917431193 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6450986768 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201067535208 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830035293248 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495694529914 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105753052992 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444066699852 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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