which is more important: duty or friendship?
In many situations, we need other people to do some jobs for us and in some situations we expect them to do their tasks as a duty or by friendship.
In my oponion, it is better to do other peoples jobs as a friendship task and not a duty. Because in many cases we dont have any duty to help our acquaintances but our friendship with them push us to help and be with them in their hard days. For example, one day your close friend is out of money and really needs help, so our humanity push us to help them, and I believe these helps would return to us and the life is not bowl of cherry and we would have hard days too.
In this world anything you do would return to you, so I believe we should help other people in a friendly manner as much as possible.
But also in some situations it is a duty for us to help other people, especially our immediate family members, for example our mother is in a needy situation and we can help them; In this condition we cant decide to help them or not; but also it is our duty to accompany them.
If we serve in a goverment or private company, we should treat other people friendly, but is also our duty to de peoples jobs and we cant decide whose job we should do first or not.
Therefore, we should help other people in a friendly manner as much as possible, but there are some people in our life which we have duty to accompany them in any situation we are, especially our parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nd not a duty. Because in many cases we dont have any duty to help our acquaintances...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly manner" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o I believe we should help other people in a friendly manner as much as possible. But also in som...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... we can help them; In this condition we cant decide to help them or not; but also it...
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Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...also our duty to de peoples jobs and we cant decide whose job we should do first or ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly manner" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... Therefore, we should help other people in a friendly manner as much as possible, but there are some...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, therefore, for example, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15770609319 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29090865898 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440860215054 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2232684201 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.875 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923346735741 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559088622667 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371110205275 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580844676575 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325824762492 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 50.2224549098 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.44 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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