Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Forests play important role in our life, they defende against air pollution by absorbing carbon dioxide and emiting oxygen. Also they hold soils from errosion and their canoppy provide suitable habitat for myriad species. So it is really vital for us to keep trees safe and control trees usage, especially logging.
In my opinion, deforestation has many effects in our life, so we must have a plan for it, otherwise it would lead to untold results for all of the creatures. One practical work can be done is replacing old trees by younger ones, means if we need to log trees, just cut down old trees and replace them by younger ones.
The other important job that should be done by us, is recycling papers which is a key factor to reduce cutting done of trees. To reach this goal, people should be trained especially by social media. It is really important to separate our garbages from our house, because it would be so hard and expensive to separate them after they have been mixed. For example, in some parts of Tehran this practice is happening and has led to good results, so it should span whole of our country.
Unfortunately, these days many forests are oblitorated and have changed to farms for producing crops, and goverments should interfer and don't allow this action as much as possible and they should provide lands for this reason and prevent ruining of biodiversity and ecosystem.
Therefore, controling and reducing of logging is a must for all of us, and it won't happen just by goverments, but also all of us are contributor in this job. Provided that we want better life for us and next generations, we should change our lifestyle from now and live our life to the full.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71476510067 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48984469534 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1044097364 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155831489885 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593757479011 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379211856325 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867141229572 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361181400679 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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