Study the table below and look for patterns in passenger death rates in Country A in relation to the modes of land transport.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The following report represents the accurate rates of deaths found in Country A in terms of the mode of transport being utilized. The report is divided 7 sections presenting Modes of transport, five sequential years (1996, 2001, 2006, 2007, 2008) and the average of these years. The numbers depict the rates per billion passenger kilometers to accommodate the vast numbers of the population. It is evidently clear that the majority of deaths in all the years combined is attributed to Motor cycle transportation while the minimum is supported by the Air transportation.
BODY:
The report under took 9 types of modes of transportation in their analysis where two of them are not related to land transportation. The rate of accidents has decreased gradually with very few fluctuations in the following years with an exception of Bus and Coach for travel. Starting with 1996, the majority of accidents can be the effect of Motorcycle, Foot and Pedal cycle respectively, with the last one amounting to approximately half of the first. By the end of 2008, the three sections show a significant decrease at least 18 percent and a maximum of 28 percent. The average shown vouches for this decrease found throughout the years. The averages obtained for these divisions oscillate in the middle and are clearly not equal to the figures with which they started or ended.
The remaining modes of transportation deals with very less numbers when compared with the above discussed sections, but the Air transportation is worth some attention. It achieved 0 passenger deaths and has maintained its record with few disturbances in the span of 12 years, starting from 1996 with a rate of death of 0.2. The Water and Rail transportation remained consistent with their numbers from 1996 to 2006, the numbers decreased minimally by the end of 2008, and almost half the original numbers. The remaining Van and Car have dwindling numbers and in terms of percentages have shown the highest rate of decrease in numbers, while the Bus and Coach have operated inversely and grew in numbers, from 0.3 in 1996 to 0.8 in 2008. Though, the trends displayed in the report can expect a diverse average numbers, unfortunately there is not much difference in figures between the numbers obtained in 1996 and their averages from 1996 to 2008. Hence, it is fair to ignore their discrepancies throughout the years.
Therefore, it is safe to assume that the number of passenger deaths in terms of mode of transportation from 1996 to 2008 has decreased enough to be noticed but not significant enough to be dismiss the problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...7, 2008 and the average of these years. The numbers depict the rates per billion pa...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ures with which they started or ended. The remaining modes of transportation deals...
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Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun numbers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...modes of transportation deals with very less numbers when compared with the above di...
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Line 4, column 809, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'number'?
Suggestion: number
...the report can expect a diverse average numbers, unfortunately there is not much differ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 33.7804878049 237% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 965.302439024 224% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 433.0 196.424390244 220% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99076212471 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 3.73543355544 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90875374856 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 106.607317073 191% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471131639723 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 283.868780488 223% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 14.0 4.33902439024 323% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4950477892 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0625 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0625 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135841987459 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536629111302 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040035637058 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959629833508 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341822492605 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 40.7170731707 226% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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