The table below gives information about UK independent films.
The table illustrates the number of independent films released and the percentage of income from ticket sale in the UK and Republic of Ireland by genre in the year 2012.
Overall, while comedy, drama and documentary were the most popular types of films watched in the UK and Ireland, the number of audience paid attention to action, biopic, and romance were the least. However, the rate of income from comedy and horror film took the lead.
Look at the table for more detail, we can see that both documentary and drama films topped the list, with 35 films released in accordance with 23,6% each. Comedy hold the runner-up, with 26 released films at 17.6%. The quantity of audience in biotic and action, romance films were the least, at 1(0.7%), 4(2.7%), and 5 (3.4%) films released respectively.
The striking feature was the level of income made from ticket sale. Comedy hold the lion’s share at 45.4% of income, which was more twice as much as that of horror films, at 20.2%, a difference of 25.2%. In the meantime, romance and thriller films created the smallest profit, at 0.8% and 1.3% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'holds'.
Suggestion: holds
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'holds'.
Suggestion: holds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88947368421 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4462589449 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542105263158 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3776766224 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0703898991719 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295337775842 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463750450249 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057562880637 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540997025138 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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