The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Essay topics:

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table demonstrates the general information about 6 underground railway systems.

The table compares the six underground railway systems in terms of years, length and the number of passengers who use them each year. It is apparent that, the oldest railway systems have the longer distance with a capacity to carry more passengers.

The oldest underground systems have own remarkable features. The London underground railway system is the oldest system which opened in 1863 whereas Tokyo underground railway system carries the most of passengers of 1927 million per year. The second oldest railway system was in Paris of opening on 19th century but is about half of the London underground railway system with 199 km of route.

The newest systems comparatively carry fewer passengers compared to the old systems with the shorter routes. Washington DC railway system carries the most passengers of 144 million per year in terms of 126 km in length among other newest railway systems. The shortest route was 11km for Kyoto railway system (opened in 1981) and 28km for Los Angeles railway system (opened in 2001) which carries 45 million and 50 million passengers, respectively.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the passengers') or simply say ''most passengers''.
Suggestion: most of the passengers; most passengers
... underground railway system carries the most of passengers of 1927 million per year. The second ol...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of passengers of 1927 million per year. The second oldest railway system was in Par...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...railway system with 199 km of route. The newest systems comparatively carry fewe...
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'second', 'whereas', 'as to']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.323383084577 0.268076937826 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.10447761194 0.116061578633 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114427860697 0.0759168565197 151% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0199004975124 0.0366838410393 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00995024875622 0.0131127313244 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139303482587 0.155750635184 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0199004975124 0.0379272487307 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65188647752 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00995024875622 0.0210936926555 47% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0995024875622 0.0948980150116 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0149253731343 0.00967000014798 154% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1179.0 1161.00487805 102% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.9 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2380952381 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.439153439153 0.337110787985 130% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301587301587 0.247514529752 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142857142857 0.171178102325 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100529100529 0.112407865282 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65188647752 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.546246751206 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.1287061867 49.3433353143 87% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0094962315 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.853744964 42.9750493124 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 135.714022679 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.0094962315 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.689975730869 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 51.1587301587 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 3.59259259259 2.94281807926 122% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471770430279 0.418131533498 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.208294808889 0.181151798455 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108406574576 0.0850326197045 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.71268961447 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182204536356 0.157042692854 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.283587013064 0.228904883108 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12967606118 0.108899403657 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.45095882294 0.367819155151 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0392931301136 0.0812612215331 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.403469067322 0.316326947829 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121360727466 0.0921553760075 132% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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