The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Essay topics:

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

the given table represents proportion of national expenditure in Ireland , italy, spain , sweden and turkey on three types of consumer items in a year 2002.

According to the data maximum expense is consumed on foods and tobaccos which is three times higher than other types of goods. The lowest outlay proportion is shown by category of leisure and eduction in all five countries.

In turkey nearly 32 percent of people budgetwent or food, drinking and smoking nearly 5 times higher than the category of clothing and footwear. Irealand is on the second top country consuming significant high amount on food and tobacoo 28.9% while italy and sweden spent higher than 15% respectively.

while 9% was the highest fraction on clothes and footwear by italy consumers whereas Irealand,spain , sweden and finally turkey expenditures were less than 7% . leisure and education highest segement was shown by turkey an sweden respectively.

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Average: 5.9 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35810810811 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77384368612 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641891891892 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0558926547 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993278014278 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472216690997 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475816792401 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068587435337 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048910797155 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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