The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions measured in millions of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

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The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.

The graph illustrates the emissions of acid rain in the UK from four different sectors during the 17 years from 1990 to 2007. The units are estimated in million tonnes.

Overall, it is clear the significant impact was on transportation and communication and in electricity, gas, and water supply, on the other hand, domestic and other industries consumed the lowest acid rain.

The most acid rain created was in electricity, gas and water supply with approximately 3.5 million tonnes in 1991, whereas, transportation and communication produced marginally 2 million tonnes. Other industries and domestics sectors contributed about 0.5 million tonnes in 1991, however, industries remained constant, while domestic dropped down to 0 tonnes. In 2007, transportation and communication product twice as less of 1991 with 1 million tonnes. Electricity, gas and water supply gradually dipped down to 0.5 million tonnes.

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Average: 6.8 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65467625899 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2495694913 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9865144112 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245758627497 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122144182661 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115831012354 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191443010556 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137072927467 0.0819641961636 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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