The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004

Essay topics:

The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

The table illustrates how many oil barrels were manufactured everyday in 4 countries between 2000 and 2004.

Overall, oil production on the basis day were significantly higher in Congo and Nigeria. On the other hand, chad had the lowest figures in the table.

In 2000, after reaching the peak at 275.000 barrels per day, the number of every day oil industry in Congo experienced a downward trend of over 70.00 barrels per day in 2004. Meanwhile, Nigeria’s production fluctuated around 200.000 barrels per day over this period to hit the highest point at 213.000 barrels per day 4 years later.

By the contrast, chad did not manufacture any oil barrels until 2003, created 8000 barrels per day, rose considerably to 50.000 barrels per day at the end year of the period. Finally, Somalia produced only 5.000 barrels per day in 2000, but later boosted its daily production to 10 times more barrels per day in 2004.

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Average: 8.4 (13 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96153846154 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63956270161 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8017673682 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155566874945 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978248609187 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896725588945 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134102119518 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871981123335 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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