The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentages of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

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The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentages of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The depicted table enumerates data and expectations about the change in the proportion of the population aged 65 and aging in three countries.

Overall, the population of aged people seems to have increased over the given period. However, Germany makes up the highest trend and expected to remain the highest trend in 2030, while Uk is undoubtedly the lowest throughout the period.

To initiate, the proportion of the population aged 65 and over in Germany had gradually increased between 1988 and 2000, rising from 20.45 percent in 1988 to exactly a half ratio in 2000. Moreover, it is expected to reach 30.42 percent in 2030.

Furthermore, between 1988 and 2000, Canada and Uk had experienced a tiny fraction changed, from 16.32 percent in 1988 to 20.67 percent in 2000. Likewise, 14.23 percent in 1988 to 14.88 in 2000, respectively. However, it is forecast to reach 26.25 percent and 20.35 percent in Canada and Uk in 2030, simultaneously.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, likewise, moreover, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20382165605 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80694501587 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496815286624 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4998204019 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128004172642 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691828545225 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12160074233 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124415924478 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147057773149 0.0819641961636 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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