Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
The major obstacles in many city centers around the globe are overpopulation. There are two principal reasons for this, employment opportunities and in search of quality education. This essay would like to configure further detail about the reasons and recommend some possible strategies to tackle these issues.
One of the main reasons for overpopulation is employment opportunities in city areas. This is because each person wants to uplift the living standard by involving in some sorts of jobs. For instance, a recent survey by oxford university showed, one-third population of developing countries like Nepal seem to transfer in developed urban areas in search of job opportunities. To tackle this issue, new projects should be implemented mostly in remote areas. Therefore, by doing this people will be engaged in those projects, as a result, the population of urban areas can be controlled.
Another reason that needs to be considered is in search of quality education. There is ample evidence that people usually migrate to large developed areas to fulfill their basic requirement and pursuing their higher studies is one of them. As an example, one of my college friends is willing to pursue his higher studies in abroad, due to the lack of quality education and highly-rated degree's. To solve this approach, governments of respective nations must establish a branch of highly rated universities in various remote areas. By implementing this, people can achieve a popular degree in their remote places.
As such it can be concluded that employment opportunities and pursuing quality education are the major cause of overpopulation. However, the establishment of new projects and a branch of the popular institute can play a significant role in tackle this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, third, as to, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37010676157 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02568129192 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548042704626 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3335999989 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242835835421 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083604165626 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06455598948 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153584765564 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432559260496 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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