Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
overpopulation is considered one of the most complicated dilemma that a plethora of nations have been suffering for several years. this essay aims to discuss the reasons behind such phenomenon in further detail and it will also offer some effective solutions to mitigate such a serious matter.
To begin with, there is no doubt that the most popular area at any city is the downtown due to various causes. Firstly, city center attracts many individuals to live there. As, it has better services than any other part of the city. For instance, Dubai city is a great place to live. Nevertheless, not all city is dwelled by people, only few places such as Jumerah, Kalifa Road and some others well known area. Since theses territories are surrounded by plenty of entertainment centers, shopping malls, restaurants and many other facilities which lure people to stay there. Secondly, most of the big companies and factories are existed in the downtown to ensure very easy access to their customers and employees. Take jeddah as an example. jeddah is the second biggest city in saudi arabia. The majority of factories and big well known organization are found at the city center. Therefore, workers or even clients prefer to live closely to their daily destination.
However, there are some solution might be effective to overcome such a phenomenon. First of all, government should relocate all big firms and factories into anther part of the city. As a result most of worker who love to be closed to their job might also move and alleviate the pressure in the main city. For example, Riyadh the capital city of saudi arabia, has allocated certain territories for factories and larg organization out of the main city. this great move is to decrease the pressure on the downtown.
Second of all, governments should also enhance the infrastructure of other part of the city. there is no doubt that most of the people can not live without at least essential services such as schools, hospitals and some supermarkets. Thus, the local authorities should put that in consideration if they are looking to defeat the overpopulation in urban cities.
To sum up, overpopulation in certain popular areas is a real matter due to different reasons. Nonetheless, there are some effective solution might work very good to reduce this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07216494845 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77127899105 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541237113402 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1568992339 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5652173913 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5652173913 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967266755587 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274680242376 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330570621602 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551585122415 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00847118490943 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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