Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Essay topics:

Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

It is clear that many nations in the world are facing with the overpopulation problem happening major in many urban centers. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, governments can take steps to mitigate this problem.

As the population in some specific cities keeps growing up every day, the overpopulation is roughly inevitable. there are various reasons for this and one of the main is that people move to urban centers in search of job opportunities. Due to the industrialization, the areas offer people propensities of idea salary and standard of living. Besides, in terms of tradditional jobs like farming, people are no longer fancy because of low profit, so, people migrate to cities from the countryside.

However, there are several actions the government could take to tackle the problem. Initially, they could offer people with incentives such as social services, healthcare systems, insurance, etc to make sure people would have a better life even they are not living in the city centers. Another solution would be increasing the price of organic, green products to enable farmers to keep their jobs and stay their income.

In conclusion, various solutions and efforts made by the government, could handle the situation and reduce the consequence of overpopulation.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33492822967 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00231514036 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.052620518 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222544726733 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836960872173 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110710912157 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13579770137 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173417298641 0.056905535591 305% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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