The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010 2012 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table illustrates how many vehicles registered in Australia in three different years of 2010, 2012 and 2014 and compare the changes between each two years in percentage.
Overall, it is obvious that among five types of vehicles, the passenger vehicles experienced the highest number of total registration , while the light trucks witnessed the least.
With 11 millions of vehicles registered in 2010, the passenger vehicles were the most registered vehicles in 2010. The number witnessed a gradual rise of one million vehicles in both 2012 and 2014, making it the highest among five types of vehicles for three years in a row with the increased of 18.2 percent compared to the beginning of the period. In the meantime, the number of registered commercial vehicles increased steadily from 2.3 millions vehicles to 2.7 millions within four years, 17.4 percent more compared to the year of 2010.
There are significant changes in the number of registered motorcycles between 2010 and 2014 when the number rocketed from 570 thousands to 745 thousands vehicles registered, with the changes of up to over 30 percent. The light trucks aloso witnessed a signifficant increase from 106 thousands to 131 thousands vehicles, 23.5 percent more to 2010. In contrast , the number of heavy trucks which were registered remained almost stable over the period with only about 10 percent changes from 384 thousands vehicles in 2010 to 423 thousands vehicles in 2014, the lowest among five types of vehicles.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the highest number of total registration , while the light trucks witnessed the le...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '11 million'.
Suggestion: 11 million
...light trucks witnessed the least. With 11 millions of vehicles registered in 2010, the passen...
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Line 4, column 358, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., 23.5 percent more to 2010. In contrast , the number of heavy trucks which were r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18518518519 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67720878848 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473251028807 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.151550086 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.5 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241276919261 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130374925289 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593079781244 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153056714723 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640060111398 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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