The supplied table depicts the results about the survey held regarding number of people of various ages took part in different cultural programs in the last dozen months. Overall, dancing, singing, playing musical, instruments, and acting had the highest participates while the computer-based activities had the least number of joiners among 1600 participates.
To embark, any performance which includes dancing, singing, playing musical instruments, and acting were mostly popular activities that people aged 16-44 enjoy with 35% for aged 16-24 and 22% for 22-44 old. While undertaking any crafts participates were around 20% for aged 45-74 and 16 and above. Any visual arts participants were 30% for age 16-24 and other aged participated were around 15%. Computer based and any writing events joiners were nearly 5% for all age groups except for 16-24 old. Undertaking any crafts and cultural purchases were the only activities with increasing participants as age increases whilst the remaining other events had an declining scale of participates as they become old.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52380952381 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8341314994 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.5694909055 43.030603864 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167865655099 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909600028388 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041754393454 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144731259618 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338884060541 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.