The table below shows the results of a survey of average number of cars per hour using three suburban roads during working hours in a ten - year pollution monitoring programme. Traffic calming was introduced in harper lane at the beginning of 1999.
The given tabular chart reveals the information about three suburban roads: harper lane, great york way, and long lane. The average number of cars during working hours in a decade pollution monitoring programme.
Overall, It is evident that the higher pollution on the great york way and long lane roads by traffic calming.
It can be seen that the average number of cars was polluted with steady increase from 1993 to 1999, and other three years average of cars were declined of pollution on the Harper lane. In additional to this on the great york way in two years pollution of cars had raised. Furthermore, the next eight years the average of pollution of cars showed ups- down trend.
As far as trend was concerned on the long lane road the average of cars were being increased regularly from year 1993 to 2002.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion of cars showed ups- down trend. As far as trend was concerned on the long ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2853121175 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5432970984 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372502999464 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187538901018 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107286592702 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219181202247 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912724486674 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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