The chart gives the information on the ages of the population of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections 2050

Essay topics:

The chart gives the information on the ages of the population of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections 2050

The circular charts give the information about the population on the ages in the different country from the year 2000 and prediction of 2050.The data is calibrated in percentum.

It can be seen that in the yemen country year 2000 the polpulation rose with50.1percentage and in the year2050 the population will be increase with 37 portion in 0-14 years. Apart from all this , the population had growmn with 46.3 share and the population will have inclined with 57.3 percentum in 15-59 years.Futhermore,60+ years, the population had been rose with 3.6 percentage together with the population will be being increased only 5.7 portion.

As far as trend was concerned in the year 2000and 2050.The population inceased with 61.6 portion together with the population will be raise with 46.2 percentum in the 15- 59 years in Italy country. In the addition to this in the 0-14 years. The population had inclined with 14.3 pottion. Moving on , the population will have rose with 11.5 percentum. Moreover, the population had been boomed up 24.1portion and the population will have increased with 42.3 percentum in 60+ years.

Overall, It is evident that the maximum population were raised in 15--59 years from Italy country and the minimum population wre sligtly increased in 60+ years from Yemen country .

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 3.97073170732 579% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16587677725 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95266467217 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478672985782 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3038290306 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.111111111 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232193234905 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113400625325 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957488516404 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183150491488 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104260695867 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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