The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

Essay topics:

The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

Revealed in the table is the statistical information regarding the satisfaction of the members by genders about the activities and facilities in the club.

At a single glance, the vast majority of male members are satisfied with a variety of activities in comparison with females; in addition, when it comes to facilities, most of the members in both genders are very content.

In terms of the gratification of activities, most of the males consider that activities are practical and useful, accounting for 55% and 40% of the surveyed members who are extremely content and satisfied respectively, while only 5% of male members dislike the activities. However, 30% of female members show more regretfulness compared to the males.

As for the comments of club facilities, both genders believe that the provided facilities are very nice with around 64% each. Moreover, about 5% of members for both sexes are gratified whereas below 15% of members argue that the facilities are poor.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, while, as for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22012578616 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96486019055 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.37434937 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22996644283 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121550292201 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633560388961 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147293579106 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706131469018 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.4329268293 188% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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