The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

Essay topics:

The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

This table shows the opinion of male and female club members of a city sports club about the services in four categories such as activities, facilities and opening hours. Overall, a significant number of female members are very satisfied with opening hours, and a few numbers of male are not satisfied with the activities.

Now, turning to the details, nearly the same number of both male and female gave their opinion to very satisfied about facilities, accounted 63% and 64%, where 22% and 27% female and male are satisfied but only 14% and 10% are not satisfied. As can be seen in the table, more than half of male than female think that club activities are very satisfied, while only 35% of women are satisfied with this facility.

We can see that, most of the people are very satisfied with services, but 37% of male and 30% of female are saying they are not satisfied with opening hours and club’s activities. The table represents that, only a tiny percentage of female members are not satisfied with opening hours; 37% of men are not satisfied; 72% of females and 44% of males are very satisfied with this service.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75634517766 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48294447584 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48730964467 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.4207976325 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.166666667 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203074138434 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144052268857 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156757872588 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178412944308 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139562479496 0.0819641961636 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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