The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words

Essay topics:

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The provided figures illustrate the information of sales at a humble restaurant in a downtown business district within a week from 7th to 13th October

Overall, in this restaurant, the amount of people coming here for dinner occupies a larger proportion than those who pay for lunch. In addition, the customers prefer spending their time in the place on weekdays rather than on weekends.

To begin with, the highest volume of money paid for lunch is on Wednesday with $2595, and the lowest amount is $1550 on Sunday. In contrast, people who have dinner here put at least $2450 on Sunday - which nearly makes a balance with the smallest money of afternoon sales. Moreover, the largest sales amount on dinner is $4350 - double bigger compared to that number of how much lunch could gain.

On the other hand, most avenue focuses on weekdays with the highest number ($4350) for dinner on Friday, whereas the highest income on weekends is only $2900 which belongs to evening servings. More specifically, even the smallest amount of money spent on weekdays ($2375 - for lunch on Thursday) is just a bit lower than the highest number of sales on weekends.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, whereas, at least, in addition, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87692307692 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44104028765 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6675907283 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.857142857 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916564787613 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401619705678 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515683794651 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748867989841 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894065343934 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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