People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
In the course of time, human has developed from a creature living in caves with only need of food and home, to the modern world with a huge number of convenient equipments around. This is a proof for this society’s ambition. No one can deny that everyone aims to have a better life for the future. So does the world where people are living. The question is how an ideal society could be seen successful and what the right way to accomplish it could be.
Personally, a perfect place for everyone is where all creatures in this planet could live peacefully together. To be more clearly, nature rules should be considered as the root for all developments in human world. In this dreamed world, there would be no high-rise building or too many artificial products which could be harmful to the rest of the Earth. In addition, animals would have their own places which appropriate to their living characteristics. Moreover, people would stand in their right position in the food chain without creating a vast of arms and weapons in order to kill and throne the world. On the other hand, all species would be treated equally.
Socially, there is a say that people are the main reason for everything, even destroying or building a heaven for all. In fact, such wonderful destination will hardly achieve if people do not make any changes. At the present, the nature has been fighting against human which has been brought by our activities in ages. As a result, there are far more people died because of disasters than in the past. This outcome is definitely not for a favored place to live. With all evidences above, it is irreplaceable for all of the people on the Earth to stop all their catastrophic behaviors towards mother nature. Planting more trees, reducing trash and cutting down pollution are the must. Furthermore, human should respect other creatures more than they had done before with no more hunting and killing for fashion or any purposes serving for people. Doing that, hopefully, one day, this planet could become a perfect society for every species.
Needless to say, no one can live without supports from others. This sentence is applicable for all situations including living, working or studying. To have an ideal place where each of us can survive peacefully and happily, people need to adjust their life styles with decreasing their greeding towards natural world like we are doing for now.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 513, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88377723971 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56228567519 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549636803874 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0240834795 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6956521739 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9565217391 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60869565217 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132929367918 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386283997194 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515103156959 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999241564309 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623873188844 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.