The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world

Essay topics:

The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world.

The given table provides an information about the mean monthly precipitation for the year in five different cities Hong Kong, Jakarta, Cairo, Tokyo and London. Units are measure in millimeter.

Overall, Hong Kong is the highest rainfall city in given five cities and on the other hand, Cairo is the minimum precipitation city. In addition, August is the maximum rainfall month of the year in Hong Kong.

According to the table, about 1160 mm precipitation occur at Jakarta in the first half of the year and then it decreases. Cairo is very dry city than other four cities and greatest amount of rainfall happen in august as well as no rain occur in last quarter of the period. Average 130 mm rain fall out in the Tokyo.

Furthermore, average 350 mm rain fall in Hong Kong in middle of the year. Then precipitation fall down rapidly. It is clear from the data, In London, average rainfall is under 80 mm approximately in the whole year and moderate change occur in the period.

Votes
Average: 6.5 (7 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, then, well, in addition, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72674418605 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58209580901 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3118378421 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313483760281 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113880101559 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857914789156 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197772758106 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580541195463 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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