Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
In the era of technology, social media is becoming popular in day by day. About 40% people are used social media for various purpose. It is very much popular not only young people but also all ages. Some people think that their has some side effect to share information on social media. In this essay I will explain both merits and demerits of social media.
On the one hand, people use social media in his smart phone. Social media is very important for the communication. Nowadays, people prefer facebook, messanger, skype, whatsapps, imo and instragram to communicate with other. It is also to build up communication and faster as well. Anyone can contact with other within a second. People also gather some knowledge from social media. In addition, people gets latest news in social media. For example, people can easily learn about traffic condition by using some facebook groups. Those groups are very much update and accurate. Sometime people use imo or messsenger to communicate with relative in another country which is very much popular in many countries.
On the other hand, there are some drawback as well. Some social media collect personal information as usual. Sometime they share our personal information with other. Furthermore, they also sell our important data with other people. For instance, truecaller apps collect data from google or other social media. It is a one kind of cyber crime. Other people can easily get personal date from truecaller. Moreover, some hacker get many sensitive data from social media. Sometime people faced problem for the social media. Specially young people faced more trouble than older people. This is also a huge problem of social media.
In conclusion, I guess that, though there are some risk on social media, it is important for our life. We get lots of benefit from social media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, i guess, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11666666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03602627715 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503333333333 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1564567748 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.8214285714 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7142857143 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348051307787 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127944223105 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109094307989 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270676036224 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710574644874 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.23 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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