Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
one of the most controversial issues today relates to the popularity of social media among different ages. it is argued that it has risks about users' private data. In this essay, I am going to examine the question from both points of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argued that the benefits of social websites considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing that is easy access to the information, which will lead to new knowledge. it is also possible to say that social platforms such as Facebook and Instagram will increase the number of new acquaintances. one good illustration of this is many families, which met their couple on the web.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposite case. it is often claimed that in fact, private information is not secure. people often have this opinion because on the internet you are sharing your date birth, country of origin, your hobbies which is a great tool for hackers. A second point is that a thief could use our posts in order to still your personal belongings. A particularly good example here is when an individual writes that he is flying out of the country for the vacation, that could mean that nobody will be in his or her house, it will be not difficult access to his home.
As we have seen, there are no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that increasing knowledge is more important than private data.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, still, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67829457364 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61124120183 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5625589993 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2142857143 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151593133763 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445387588716 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581570864412 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839392965487 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336529665157 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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