Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
it is argued that jams and pollution could be solved if the government will increase the cost of gasoline. this essay agrees with this statement, because by doing this, people will switch to public carrier, which will decrease the traffic; furthermore some users will start to drive more eco-friendly cars, which will protect the earth from pollution. The other good idea will be to introduce time limited permits for the driving vehicle.
it is certainly true that the reason for the bad nature is petrol. if the prices will be higher for gasoline, to save money, some people will begin to use buses, subways, and trains. For example, 1 sedan can fit around 5 people at the same time, while the bus or train can fit more than 20. so, instead of 5 simple vehicles, on the road will be only 1 public carrier.
it is widely believed that some of us could not imagine their lives without their personal cars. The high cost of petrol will encourage some of us to buy an electro mobile, which is considered to be ecologically friendly. Such type of technology uses electricity, so we just will need to charge it with the help of the power supply. For instance, a recent study shows that by 2040 people will start using cars like Tesla and it will be a great step for dealing with the problems related to pollution.
Also, the limitation of using vehicles will positively affect the environment, as well as it may make the roads more free. The Parlament of the country can produce special permits for driving transport for specific times. For example, one type of permit could be only weekend drive, and another one could be no more than 10 hours per week and each owner could decide which one will be comfortable for them. By doing this, car traffic will be significantly decreased and the quality of our nature will be better.
In conclusion, the high price of gas will encourage to use of more environment-friendly cars and passengers will use public transport which will decrease the traffic jams. Finally, the state can decrease the usage of vehicles by introducing special allowances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 31.0 7.85571142285 395% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79945054945 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56768506272 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543956043956 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.130978378 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.764705882 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929771048025 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374389587666 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356337894042 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600313160972 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313837564108 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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