The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveyed asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates data about how many people visiting Ashdown Museum at two different times, before and after its refurbishment. Meanwhile, the pie charts highlight information about the percentage of visitors who had different levels of satisfaction in the same years.
Overall, it can be seen that after the museum underwent some changes, the number of visitors saw quite a considerable increase. Another notable point was an improvement in visitor satisfaction, as positive feedback was on the rise.
Particularly, the number of visitors setting foot in the museum went up by 18,000, from 74,000 during the year before it was refurbished to 92,000. The changes applied also led to better satisfaction among the visitors, as the percentage of people who were very satisfied increased by 20 percent, accounting for over one-third of the survey participants. There was also an upward trend in the figure of satisfied visitors, it went from 30 to 40 percent after the renovation.
The opposite was true for people who are not pleased with their trip. As regards dissatisfied visitors, the figure declined significantly by 25 percent, while the proportion of very dissatisfied ones also fell from 10 to 5 percent after the refurbishment. Visitors who gave no response took up 5 percent of the survey in both years.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, third, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22535211268 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03803393689 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600938967136 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8514381632 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.3 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279026833321 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991671931787 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549505514172 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153149563747 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419437584625 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.