The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms of the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand.

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The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms of the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand.

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The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms of the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand.

Submitted by masoud2907 on Sat, 05/11/2019 - 07:27

The tables below demonstrate the outcomes of a survey about shops and restaurants among men and women. Tables contribute the percentage of men and women who have disparity feeling about shops and restaurants of a new shopping center. The pie chart compares the feedback of people.
Overall, men and women were satisfied shops and a few women did not have specific comment about shops (9%).females were more pleased rather than males about shops twice as much. However, males are more in column of satisfied people. As the table demonstrates share of men and women who are unsatisfied are equal.
Most of men and women were satisfied with the restaurants. Besides, the lowest share of second table is belonging to men who are unsatisfied. In contrast, there are many women who did not pleased restaurants. Also, considerable population of women did not have comment.
The greatest proportion of pie chart which is around 60% is given as people who were satisfied. Somewhat more than one tenth of people are dissatisfied and a few people did not have comment. Meanwhile, a little less than one fifth of people are just satisfied. Besides, 10% of people did not have specific comment.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the men') or simply say ''Most men''.
Suggestion: Most of the men; Most men
... women who are unsatisfied are equal. Most of men and women were satisfied with the resta...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb belong is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'belongs'
Suggestion: belongs
...sides, the lowest share of second table is belonging to men who are unsatisfied. In contrast...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...sides, the lowest share of second table is belonging to men who are unsatisfied. In contrast...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, second, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 32.9175257732 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99494949495 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68778464679 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 127.690721649 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459595959596 0.622605031667 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8746940644 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6428571429 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137176115701 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521446677687 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680667456106 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975726950039 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101876062054 0.0580467560999 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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