The map shows town Tarnagul's development in the years 1900,1950 and 2000.The town is situated near Melbourne city.
Overall, the town has developed significantly with more shops and markets for the people of Tarnagul. However, the road and river has remained constant all these years.
To begin with, the rural area had only a couple of shops in the year 1900 like dairy, town area, oranges etc. In 1950, lemons and grapefruit and packing sheds have been established. Also, the Mandarins has been replaced by another oranges shop. To continue, a track has also been constructed in the area which passes through the packing sheds area.
Year 2000 has again seen a growth in the town with more facilities added for the resident people. Both the orange shops have been cut down and the area is left empty. Another major change is that the lemons and grapefruit shop has been replaced by a Wildlife sanctuary for the inhabitants to see various wild animals. Also, a park was constructed to the south of Tarungul just below the road. Local museum and craft market now take place of the packing sheds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...lopment in the years 1900,1950 and 2000.The town is situated near Melbourne city. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84656084656 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37948220336 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6789743218 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110330917594 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422943262842 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817830029028 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105760037657 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10746458077 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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