Missions to investigate space demand very high costs and there are various other difficulties on our planet that are to be looked into. One solution to this, is to limit the frequency of travel into space. In my opinion, I agree that space adventures must be given less priority by citing a couple of ideas with related examples.
To begin with, space travel is very complex and risky process that involve huge capital investment inorder to make the travel successful. However, this large amount of money can be utilized to solve other various problematic situations on Earth. For instance, poverty is one of the most noticeable problems in many countries. Therefore, the capital required for a space mission can be used to overcome the poverty problems around the world.
Secondly, for a space adventure to be made possible, a humongous spacecraft must be built so that the sky travellers can travel to space safely without facing any bad situations. Furthermore, building the space shuttles require large amount of construction materials, for example, Iradium, stainless steel, aluminium etc. So, instead of using these valuable materials in the making of a spacecraft, such materials can be utilized in constructing flyovers, buildings, railway tracks and other important buildings which are required for accomplishment of variety needs of people in the world.
In contrary to above discussed two points, space exploration is also necessary to dig out data about multiple planets, asteriods and stars that are formed naturally some millions of years ago in our galaxy.
To conclude, I mostly agree to the fact that other major problems in the world must be given greater importance than compared to promoting space exploration.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26978417266 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8070302398 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6188469615 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226653571585 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807340708014 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452000511168 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117292309991 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428473328373 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.