Task 1:The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The table compares the proportion of people using bicycles in 5 age groups and by gender during the year 2011.
Overall, while children aged 0-9 years hold the highest position in both male and female groups, people among 40-59 aged group took the least rate in both two gender group.
In term of female group, 51.3% children among 0-9 age group using bikes. Following it was the teenagers and adults group which are just 42.2% and 17.1% respectively. The elderly are likely to ride bicycles more than the middles-aged group
In term of male group, most people using bike is from 0-9 years old. Which is accounted for 50.3%. While the percentage of people drive bicycles among teenagers and people over 60 years old was 24.6% and 13.2% respectively, the young adults and middle-aged were lower at just 9.7% and 8.0% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...osition in both male and female groups. While people among 40-59 aged group took the ...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icycles more than the middles-aged group In term of male group, most people using...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90845070423 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3655368797 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0215195093 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 5.23603664747 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196882901317 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957321268343 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673776836315 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146119936108 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590482044278 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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