These given maps depict information about how to reach road access to a City Hospital in 2007 and 2010.
At first glance, it is clear that changes are made in the construction of Roundabouts, Bus Station, and Car Park. In 2010, two Roundabouts were constructed. The first one was built in the intersection between City Road and Hospital Road, while other Roundabout was constructed in the three-way-intersection between Ring Road and Hospital Road.
Besides that, new Bus Station was built in 2010. Previously, there were several Bus Stops along Hospital Road in 2007. But, 3 years later, those Bus Stops were removed and replaced by new Bus Station that was located in the southwestern side of the map. There was also change made related to the Car Park. In 2007, there was only one Car Park that was used for Staff and Public. The next 3 years, new Car Park was established in the northeastern side of the map. The new Car Park was used for Public Car Park, while the old Car Park, which was located in the southeastern side of the map, was used for Staff Car Park.
In conclusion, some changes are made during 3 years period. Those changes are about replacement of old facilities with new facilities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74881516588 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78364919832 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492890995261 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5541075691 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0769230769 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140301989333 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662096069661 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879685573205 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130551462774 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120758293553 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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